Step 01
Right Offer
A specific ask, not a generic appeal — clear enough to act on immediately.
The offer is the single, concrete thing you're asking someone to fund. “Support our mission” isn't an offer — it's a slogan. A real offer names one problem, one outcome, and one dollar figure a donor can picture funding today.
Weak vs. strong
Weak: “Help us support families in need.” Strong: “$45 provides 10 emergency food packs for flood-affected families this week.”
Checklist
- Goal is specific and time-bound, not open-ended
- One primary ask per campaign — not three asks bundled together
- Cost is broken into a concrete, fundable unit
- Framed around impact and outcome, not organisational need
- Ask size matches what this specific audience can realistically give
Do
- Use concrete numbers
- Tie the ask to one outcome
- Make the amount easy to visualise
Don't
- Bundle three asks in one appeal
- Use vague mission language
- Set a goal detached from real need
KPIs to track
Click-to-donate rate
Whether the offer is compelling enough to convert interest
Average gift vs. suggested tier
Whether the ask size is calibrated to the audience
Landing page bounce rate
Whether the offer is clear the instant someone arrives
Troubleshooting
High traffic, low donations
Offer is too vague — rewrite around one problem and one figure
Gifts below suggested tiers
Ask is too high or impact isn't clear — lower the entry tier and add framing



